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[Avido]

Elliot - The Motel

Elliot had an attitude that at least once in his his life he would like to try everything. This often made things very interesting. More than once we found ourselves in situations into which I would never have ventured alone. However, this time it was me that pushed the envelope...

By now we'd been together for a couple of months and had tried everything we could think of, in everyplace we could think of; his house, my house, his car, my car, outdoors - woods, beach, behind a cinema once - and even in a swimming pool changing cubical once.

A lot of the outdoor activity was out of necessity as we were both still living with our parents at the time. The weather sometimes cramped our outdoor pursuits. A handy solution to this was our nearest motel, where for thirty quid or so we could "get a room".  We'd done that a couple of times with no incident other than suspicious looks from the receptionist as we checked in with very little baggage. - Oh! And a near miss when housekeeping walked in one morning while I was giving Elliot a facial - we just about got away with that one - we think!

The third time we booked into the motel was when I decided to push the boundaries...

We dropped into the bar first for a drink. We were both sagging low in tight black skinnies. I was into this emo thing with eyeliner too at the time. I remember I was sagging most of my arse in white boxer trunks and Elliot was sagging in lime green Hollisters. Elliot noticed a guy checking us out. Well, more than checking us out - really couldn't keep his eyes off us!

Older than us, say late twenties, not bad looking. Company type in a suit, sitting at the bar on his mobile. Sitting at the bar on his phone may be, but so checking us out. Blatantly!

We sat there, sipping alcopops, catching his eye, taking the piss, grinning. I dropped a beermat 'accidently' on the floor. Stood up and made sure he got a great view as I bent to pick it up. That was when I had the idea. What if we got him back to our room - to watch?

I told Elliot what I was thinking. "Try anything once" was his predictable reply.
I felt a surge of excitement and thought how best to set this up. 

As we finished our drinks I took a paper napkin from the bar and wrote on it:-
Room 23   15 minutes  Wanna watch?
And left it on the bar right next to the guy. 

He looked at me. I grinned. He looked at the napkin and back at me, and flashed a smile, picked up the napkin and stuffed it in his suit pocket.

Two minutes later we're back in our room and Elliot, for once, is the one getting nervous.
"So let me get this right: the plan is to make out and let the guy watch?"
"Yup! That's right."
"Err, so, I err..."
"Didn't you tell me you wanted to do porn? At least once?"
"Yes, but..."
"Well, think of it as a rehearsal."
"Oh f*ck... "

Fifteen minutes after leaving the bar there's a knock at our door. And there's our man with three more alcopops and two plastic bottles of Cola.

"Hi guys. Can I assume we're not talking about watching football on your tv?"
"You can assume that. I think we might give you something you'll enjoy watching more. Much more."
"I think we're thinking along the same lines here. Another drink boys?"
"I think I'll need another drink." Elliot interjected.
"My mate here is feeling a little nervous about this. Any suggestions what can be done about that?"
"I could just suggest what I'd like to see and you guys could let me know if that's what you'd like to do? I'll open the drinks."

I'm already hard by this time and in my skinnies it must have been obvious."Let's do this."
"Let me just check out your sags. You're really into sagging?" 
"Oh yeah! It's sooo hot."
"Those white boxers make your arse look well peachy. How about sagging a little lower?" I  wriggled my skinnies lower and turned around so he could get a good view. Elliot grinned and joined in pulling his jeans down so they were just above his **** and below his butt. 

"That's a really vivid green mate. Well nice arse too! How about getting them just a little lower than that. Might be nice to take the pressure off that boner." I'd been so distracted by the throbbing in my own pants I hadn't, for once, noticed the monster in E's boxers. Elliot lowered his belt a very significant couple of inches. His ****, still in his boxers, popped up above the belt. 

"Whoa! Nice! I see you're getting quite enthusiastic there mate." said the guy.
"How about you start with some Emo kissing?"

I was so turned on by this. It felt like we were doing this guy a favour. I could tell Elliot still wasn't so sure about it. His kisses were hesitant at first - not like him!  We knelt in the centre of the bed groping each other's sag.   Elliot began to relax a little. I felt his kisses get more enthuiastic. His boner pressed against me as we hugged. We carried on like this for a little while and the guy settled himself in the chair in the corner of the room.  After a while he spoke again.

"Think may be it's time to take your shirts off lads? And by the way how old are you?"
"Nineteen" we both replied as Elliot pulled my shirt over my head and I removed his  likewise. 

"Nineteen - that's the best age ever you know. I reckon we all look at our most beautiful at nineteen. Enjoy every minute of it boys."
"We are!" I smirked "We are!" I pushed Elliot down on to the bed and ran my tongue over his nipples. I couldn't help but check out his crotch with a hand. Inside his tight boxers he was as hard as a rock. It seemed he was getting used to this scenario. I slipped my hand between his trousers and his boxers to grope around. 

"Why not undo his belt and buttons to get a little more room in there?" says the guy.
I obeyed, and Elliot offered no hint of objection. 
"Loosen your own belt too. Let your pants slip a little further too. Those white boxers are almost transparent you know."
I undid my belt and as I knelt over Elliot my trousers slipped down my thighs leaving my white cotton clad ass sticking up in the air. I continued giving Elliot's chest all my attention, running the tip of my tongue around and across the tips of his nipples. Could feel my boner tenting wildly in my boxers. Elliot placed a hand between my legs and massaged my balls and gently squeezed. 

"I reckon you may need to get these off matey. Seems a little crowded in there."
"Oh no, not fair. I'm not getting naked while you've still got your trousers on."
Elliot was getting more confident with the situation. "Ok! Ok! I'll get naked! Keep your pants on!" Elliot wriggled about on the bed, getting his skinnies off and kicked them on to the floor. He started getting his boxers off when the guy stopped him.

"Wait lads! Slow down. Let's take some time over this." Elliot grinned, we were both sitting on the bed in our socks and undies with boners the size of cruise missiles. 

"Do you wanna see us take a shower Dude?"
"Great idea! Especially you in the white boxers. That would be way hot!"
So, it was me first then. We moved into the small bathroom and I stepped into the shower.   Elliot turned on the water warm slowly. I remembered that first time in the wetroom. The guy was just lapping this up. Elliot climbed into the shower too, facing me, reached around to play with my soaking wet arse  and boxers.  I stuck out my tongue and he reciprocated with his. We licked each other's tongue tips as the water poured over us and groped each other's arses as our knobs jostled against each other trapped in our wet pants. 
After a while the guy gave us our instructions again. "Yeah. The white boxers are very nearly transparent now. Would you like me to take them off for you?" he asked.
"Uh huh" I replied with my tongue in Elliot's mouth. The guy reached into the shower. I rearranged my boner, so he could get my boxes down, and I stepped out of them, all the time still snogging Elliot. I was so fuckin' excited by this. This stranger taking my knickers off and just watching us. It was wild!  I got Elliot out of his Hollisters and we carried on sucking face while being watched.  Elliot used the shower gel from the dispenser to wash my hair and I did the same for him. We had a bit of a thing for washing each other's hair; it was something that we'd done a few times before. We ran our hands over each other's bodies as the water poured over us. I was close to jizzing there and then. With more shower gel we washed each other all over with particular attention to our asses, cocks and ball sacks, all the while making sure our guy was getting a good view. When the bathroom was getting well steamy the guy spoke. 

"Reckon it's time you slowed it down a little again. Might be it's time for the Cola bottles!"
We both stopped and simultaneously said "What?"
He fetched the cola and explained what to do with it.  We followed instructions and used the bottles on each other. Well - that was one thrilling experience! Don't know why we hadn't thought of it ourselves! 

This guy I had invited to watch was taking over. He had no hesitation in giving us our instructions. I'd thought he would probably get a thrill out of watching us, just as I'd get a thrill from being watched. To be honest I thought we'd embarrass the hell out of him. I hadn't expected him to be so confident with his instructions. Nor had I expected us to be quite so compliant and to start behaving like his own sex slaves!

Then Elliot took me by surprise when he spoke. "So sir, what would you like to see now?" my god he was getting into this submissive thing more than I was!

"Back to the bed boys. Now that your clean inside and out... You..." he said indicating me "...face down on the bed and arse in the air." Then to Elliot: " Spread him. Let me see what you'll be getting." and then "Get in there, enjoy your boyfriend's pussy. He's nice an' fresh." Elliot didn't hesitate.   He was straight in there. I felt his tongue tickling me. "Come on now, right in there. Get in there like you're loving it. You know he is." He was right I was loving it! I could feel E't tongue lapping me, then pushing and probing into me. And not stopping but continuing on and on. This was so wild! I could see the guy watching us, telling us what he wanted to see. I could feel Elliot's tongue. I sensed his excitement. I was getting really close to cumming again.

"Ok. You can stop now. It's time for you to suck your boyfriend to reward him." No hesitation from me either. I loved sucking E! He flopped down on the bed and I grabbed his knob. I began by by licking its tip and watching our 'instructor' watching me. I kept my eyes fixed on the guy as I slowly wrapped my lips around its head and began to slide him in and out of my mouth. 

It was the wanton shamlessness of the afternoon that was just so great. F*cking with my beautiful boyfriend and being watched by an approving older guy!  It was so damn free! - Let's just describe the situation again. - I'm naked, erect. On my knees with my legs apart. I'm going down on Elliot who's also nude, rock hard and loving my attention. And the guy's just sitting there, watching me suck with my naked arse in the air! F*cking unbelievable! Wonderful afternoon!

"Ok, let your mate suck you at the same time." I swung my hips over Elliot's face and he took my **** in his mouth. It didn't take us long. About a minute later we both came with brilliant simultaneous orgasms. And with mouths full of cum we flopped on the bed, hugged, kissed and left our exhausted wet dicks on show - just to give the guy a final eyeful! 

We sat there naked on the bed; he brought us our half forgotten drinks. We slowly drained the bottles while he gazed at us admiringly. I just loved it. Loved every second of being nineteen! 

Just a few minutes after that the guy's phone rang. Conversation went: "Hi love. How ya doing? Uh-huh. Can I call you back in ten minutes? I'm just with a couple of guys. Ok. Speak to you soon. Love ya!" 

It was his wife he explained. And with that he left our room, never to be seen again. 

[blade]

Yet another great story from a great writer! Loved reading it as usual, really dragged me into the story

[CosmoBoy]

Hey Avido, great follow up. I really like how it gets more kinky bit by bit in every sequel, and the voyeur thing in this one is really pushing it one step further !!

So you said it was in bits inspired by stuff you experienced yourself, is that the case with this episode ? Would be quite hot...

[Avido]

Sadly never been a voyeur or been a voyeuree! So this episode is complete fantasy. Nearest I've been to being watched was when I shared a house with 2 straight guys. We had a porn DVD left over from a stag night that some slightly gay bits in it. I was fairly drunk and decided to **** to those particularly bits while one of my mates was upstairs. Needless to say he came downstairs while I was mid ****. It was really obvious what I was doing but because I was drunk I just carried on! He stayed to watch and we never mentioned the incident afterwards! Hehe!

[CosmoBoy]

That's a pretty hot story too, man ! It actually sounds like a porn script , with big, obvious coincidences ! LOL
Could be a start for one of your hot stories...